Can you please help with my resume. 10 points for your help. Thank you?

September 24th, 2009 | by admin |

  1. 2 Responses to “Can you please help with my resume. 10 points for your help. Thank you?”

  2. By bar_two_123 on Sep 24, 2009 | Reply

    - I would remove "(Received 100% tuition reimbursement) ". I think it unnecessary.
    - Your first to bullets both start with "managing". Maybe you should try a thesaurus and come up with some different descriptive words. You have some other duplicates too. Really try to make those descriptive words pop.
    - You’ll want to put your most impressive bullets first.
    - "•Assisting the long-term projects with the department
    " that phrase doesn’t make sense.
    - under your training, I wouldn’t put a comma after the month. (ie. June 2006, not June, 2006)
    - What’s the SILVER Award for?
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  3. By bryanmccarey on Sep 24, 2009 | Reply

    Go to a resume writing site and learn. I agree with bar two. Plus add a personal page. You need to add warm of your personality. It is a big part of the hiring process. You should know that being in HR. Revamp the resume and post it again. Be ready to revamp it a few times before submitting it.
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