REALLY NEED YOUR HELP–Proof read my resume. Thank you so much.?

September 22nd, 2009 | by admin |

  1. 5 Responses to “REALLY NEED YOUR HELP–Proof read my resume. Thank you so much.?”

  2. By Jacqui on Sep 22, 2009 | Reply

    The resume looks great, all the required information is there. I don’t know what it looks like in terms of format when you print it, but the info. is well written. You just need to keep in mind the length of your resume. Depending on where you are submitting it, some places require a maximum # of pages. Also, what makes a really powerful impact is a cover letter, and after your interview, a followup "thank you" letter. GOOD LUCK!
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  3. By Meghan on Sep 22, 2009 | Reply

    OBJECTIVE To Succeed in a competitive business environment by capitalizing my customer service skills and strong work ethic

    EDUCATION
    Master of Public Administration Graduation: May 2008
    (Human Resources Management)
    Bowie State University, Bowie, MD
    G.P.A. 3.70/4.0

    Bachelor of Arts in Political Science Graduation: May 2006
    Edinboro University, Edinboro, PA
    G.P.A. 3.21/4.0 (Completed 4-year program in 3 years)

    WORK EXPERIENCE
    Graduate Assistant to the Chair August 2006-Present
    Department of Management, Marketing, and Public Administration Bowie State University, Bowie, MD

    •Organized conference/internship/scholars
    •Managed graduate students’ official files and documents
    •MPA program liaison
    •Advised undergraduate students
    •Developed and updated department website
    •Broadcasted information and scheduling courses on the university databases
    •Conducted research for MBA program coordinator
    Graduate Student Worker (Part-time) August 2004-February 2008 Edinboro University and Bowie State University Sodexho, USA
    •Assisted the general managers in planning and organizing various restaurants on campus
    •Providedstrong team work and support to achieve the goals of the company
    •Ranked highly among the team for excellent service and strong sales

    Intern May-August, 2005 The Royal Thai Embassy, Washington, D.C.
    •Assisted the Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission (International Relations)
    •Verified official documents (passport, visa, naturalization, and legalization)
    INTERNATIONAL ACCOMPLISHMENTS
    Featured in the Bowie State University (HBCU) viewbook and website in “Spotlight” section, Fall 2007

    Organized and hosted “Women and Children in Japanese Society” Speech and Dinner, the guest speaker was the First Secretary of the Consulate General of Japan in New York, Fall 2005.

    Assisted the Thai Minister/Deputy Chief of Mission and organized “A Taste of Thailand” Gala Dinner, a benefit for the post-tsunami support of schools and living facilities for the orphans in Thailand, Summer 2005.
    Served as the Vice President of the Asia Club at Edinboro University, organized an educational trip to Harvard University and Massachusetts Institute of Technology, Spring 2004.
    AWARDS
    Graduate Assistantship 2006-2008
    SILVER Academic Award 2005-2006
    Julie Lieber International Scholarship 2004-2005
    ASSE International Exchange Program Scholarship, United States, 2002-2003
    PROFESSIONAL DEVELOPMENT TRAINING
    •Member of Society for Human Resource Management 2007-2008
    •Website Development Training September, 2007
    •OSDBU Procurement Conference April, 2007
    •Faculty Research and Scholarship Training Series March, 2007
    SKILLS
    Microsoft Office Applications (Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Outlook, Internet)
    Research (Collecting, Managing, Analyzing, and Presenting Data)
    Communication Skills (English and Thai)

    References, Writing Samples, and Portfolios Available Upon Request

    ***Just watch your verb tenses, you switch throughout the resumé. Good job!
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  4. By Mandie on Sep 22, 2009 | Reply

    GPA’s arent necessary
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  5. By Heather P on Sep 22, 2009 | Reply

    you have a masters of public administration and you’re putting your resume on yahoo answers? Interesting.

    Remember, this proof reading only goes so far bc 1/2 the resume is form, making sure everything is all on the same margin, you have it down to 1 page, etc.

    Good luck!
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  6. By jen48220 on Sep 22, 2009 | Reply

    I would take out the GPAs. I have never seen a resume listing them. Also, the objective is "To succeed…"
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